I honestly thought this book was dead until I ran into it just now and can't say I'm disappointed. I loved it when you last updated it however long ago and I love it now. :) Keep it up and I can't wait to read more.

IT'S BACK!
DUN DUN DUN!

And of COURSE you bring it back with GRIEF. How could you. It took two years for my heart to heal and then you just TEAR IT OPEN AGAIN.
Ahhh, this is so nostalgic! I'm reminded again of my love for Blazzel (see that? Up there ? 'Romance/Hurt/Comfort')

WE HAVE HAD ENOUGH HURT, OKAY? YOU CAN GET TO THE COMFORT AND ROMANCE NOW.
PLEASE.
HAVE PITY.

The writing is really good, especially at the end - can't wait for Hazzel to kick some veisiat ass at army school. Make your sister proud, H! She's watching you and she is PROUD and HAPPY and STILL DESERVES BETTER.

*composes self*

Anyway, now that you've put me to shame by updating again, I guess I'll have to crack on too! Hope you keep this story alive, I love it just as much as I did when you started it, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Adios! :D

Sooooo good. It took me a bit to catch up, but it was worth it. When Blade got pneumonia, I was like "If you kill him, I will find you and slice off your head." But it just turned out to be Cawyrt, so the ship is safe.

I mean, oh no, Cawyrt is dead. Or is she? Dun dun duuuuuuuuuun.

ok i really don't want to sound picky here... but if you wear contacts for too long they start to become kinda gunky with all the sleep and everything, so if she wears them 24/7 for two weeks then she won't be able to see through them any more and they will be kind of gross and she has to clean them every night anyway (for hygiene) and also...

HOW THE BLOODY HELL COULD YOU DO THAT TO CAWRYT!

I THOUGHT THAT AFTER VIALET YOU WOULD LET HER LIVE

BUT NO YOU JUST GO AND KILL HER OFF

BEING AN AUTHOR DOES NOT MEAN

KILLING OFF EVERY SINGLE BLOODY CHARACTER

THAT THE BLOODY PROTAGONIST CARES ABOUT

ESPECIALLY NOT MY BLOODY FAVOURITE CHARACTER

you are gonna live to regret this, I'm telling you

wwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

DUNDUNDUNDUUUUUUUNNNNN

OOOOOOH THIS IS DRAMATIC
cawryt so saaaaaaad :((((. But-

BLAZZEL MOMENTS XD
ME LOVE BLAZZEL MOMENTS!

But so sad...
BUT BLAZZEL MOMENTS
BUT
CAWRYT DX
BUT BLAZZEL

WHY
WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME

IM FLIPPING FUMING RIGHT NOW I BREATHING SO HEAVILY YOU HAVE NO IDEA! i f***ING HATE VIEIS. IM WANNA KILL THEM ALL NOW CAWRYT IS GONNA DIE AND SHES ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE PORTAL! THAT IS IF SHE'S NOT ALREADY DEAD THAT IS I CANT BEAR I WANT TO HIT YOU FOR POTENTIALLY KILLING CAWRYT

NONONONONONONONONONONNONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOOO!
THIS IS THE EXACT OPPOSITE OF WHAT I HOPED FOR
AHHHHHHHCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKK NO CAWRYT
THIS IS RUINING MY LIFE
PLEASE NO SAY THAT SHE GOT OUT OR SOMETHING AND IS GONNA SURVIVE OR SHE'LL FIND ANOTHER WAY HOME OR SOMETHING
CAWRYYYYYYYYT!
I'm so glad to see that you're back, though! I missed this story so much!
But with TRAGIC RESULTS.
APPARENTLY.
I CAN'T ACCEPT THIS
*heavy sobbing forever*

~A.G.

Well done. You just signed your death warrant. What made it worse is you dragged it out which is why it'll be slow for you now.

called it.

:(

still, at least Blade is being really nice (of course he is) I bet he'll get Hazzel flowers or choccies or something because he's really nice and he'll be trying to cheer her up.

In the meantime...
Hazzel, you pick yourself up, 'kay?
You take care of yourself, gurl and don't let those Veis get you down.
I know it hurts but Cawryt wouldn't want you to shut yourself away.

AAAAWWWWWWWWW!
THATS SO SWEET!
BUT IM SO SCARED FOR CAWRYT!
WHAT IF SHES D... DEA... DEAD!
THERES ONLY ONE WEEK LEFT UNTIL THE PORTALL CLOSES AND SHES LEFT FOR DEAD!
WWWHHHYYY?!

Also I live the biological language like antibodies and pathogens. Ooh! Loved the chapter it was really fantabulazing (*fanta*stic, fa*bul*ous, am*azing*) xxx

AWW! LOVE IT! ️
SO BEUATIFUL! AND I LOVE THE FACT THAT THE NURSE IS HUMAN. IT MAKES IT SO MUCH NICER! (sorry this is all in caps) AND BLADE MUST HAVE TOLD THE NURSE THAT HAZZEL WAS HIS *GIRLFRIEND*!

FANGIRL FANGIRL FANGIRL

Love the chapter (she days fangirling) x

OHHHH MY GOSH BLAZZEL BLAZZEL BLAZZEL!
HE KISSED HER! OMG OMG OMG YES MY OTP
Buuuut oh dear, Cawryt... I'm so worried...
This chapter was great, I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!
Have fun on your holiday! -

~A.G.

YAY Love the ending of that chapter. Despite everything he went through, Blade doesn't lose his sense of humour and offers an effective distraction. XD Have a good holiday!
Update soon! Chapter made my day :)

...
...CANT...
...HOLD...IT...IN...

SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I
KNEW
IT

HES
BETTER
AND
BLAZZEL
IS
BEAUTIFUL
AND
EVEN
THOUGH
HES BEEN THROUGH HELL AND BACK HES STILL TRYING TO CHEER HER UP AND
'DISTRACT HER' teehee

AAAAAAAAEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW BLADE YOU PERFECT PERSON YOU ARE BAE
I WISH U WERE REAL SO I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG
OH
HAZZEL YOU LUCKY LUCKY GIRL
U DONT EVEN KNOW IT YET
AND HES SO SASSY
'MISSION ACCOMPLISHED'
OF COURSE IT IS
BLADE
AND
HAZZEL
SITTIN' IN A TREE
DOING WHAT THEY SHOULDN'T BE

X'D
I CANT HANDLE IT
IM SMILING SO MUCH I PROBS LOOK LIKE A PSYCHOPATH BUT WHO CARES?!"?!
BLAZZEL
FINALLY KISSED
AND SHE WAS LIKE

WAT!

AND HE WAS LIKE

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED

DAT SASS DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
LOVE IT
SO MUCH
CANT EVEN PUT IT INTO WORDS BUT YOU CAN SEE THAT I'VE TRIED
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE TIMES 100000000000000000000000000000000

LOVE IT
SO MUCH

:3