Reviews for Nuevo Judea: The Divide
HarryL chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Good to see you're still tinkering with this setting!
pastryninja chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
I like the setting, and was surprised by the acid rain. The descriptions also add to the story.

But I was confused when the father and son were shot, and the dialogue that followed. What exactly happened after the shooting? Were the speakers the shooters, and if so, why did they shoot? And I was also thrown off by the sudden change to Baqh'Medina.