|Reviews for Seven by Seven|
| pastryninja chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
I was not expecting that twist, but I loved it! Isn't it strange how the delusion is scarier than the zombies? Nathan truly is trapped, just not in the way he thinks.
Nice descriptions of the "zombies." They grossed me out. And Nathan's fear was very vivid.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
Wow. My favorite horror stories are the ones that make the human mind scary. And you did a genius job at that. I mean...wow. I thought the world was really overtaken by zombies. And the way you described them showed how real they were in Nathan's mind. That was very powerful.
Just make sure when you leave sentences or words unfinished you insert an ellipsis (...) at the end. And when you indicate speech, us "..." instead of '...' These adjustments will make your story easier to read and get your wonderful ideas across more clearly.