|Reviews for The Other Side|
| Emberfur28 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
wow... I love it! The emotion depicted between Damian and Natalie is perfect, and I love Nat's saltiness.
| Turning Empty Pages chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
"He body shaking." I think you meant, "his body shaking."
You put Timmy but earlier spelled it Timy.
"how he beauty," I think you meant her.
It is sad that someone gets killed for something their never did, at least he's now an angel.
| Turning Empty Pages chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
I feel really bad for Jane. Poor girl.
| Turning Empty Pages chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
You put: She slammed her tray down onto the table, glaring and Damian.
I think you meant 'at Damian.'
In the first mention of the Mermaid's Heart, you didn't put an apostrophe.
"'Cat go claws?'" I think you mean, "Cat's got claws?"
"Then brake up with him!"
I think you mean "break."
I feel kind of bad for Natalie for loving someone else while dating someone else, that she had to resort to cheating on him. It is the dark side of love.
| LexxiHart chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
I really enjoyed reading this!
I love your writing style. Paired with my weakness for cute romances, its perfect. 3
It's so elegant and sleek. Can't wait for more! :)
| shinju asuka chapter 2 . 10/14/2015
Reread the first chapter and just realized it is only one shot. The first chapter really has potential to be interesting multi chapters story.
However i also enjoy reading the second chapter. Poor Jane. Bravo to how you ended this chapter!
| deleted-account197 chapter 2 . 10/12/2015
These are so cute and sad. I really liked the Fred Damien part, because it was realistic. The second one was the best to now. I think it's good that you took up the lesbian part and it was sad with Gareth/Gary. Good work, and keep on writing : )