Reviews for The Other Side
Emberfur28 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
wow... I love it! The emotion depicted between Damian and Natalie is perfect, and I love Nat's saltiness.
Good job!
Turning Empty Pages chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
"He body shaking." I think you meant, "his body shaking."

You put Timmy but earlier spelled it Timy.

"how he beauty," I think you meant her.

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It is sad that someone gets killed for something their never did, at least he's now an angel.
Turning Empty Pages chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
I feel really bad for Jane. Poor girl.
Turning Empty Pages chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
You put: She slammed her tray down onto the table, glaring and Damian.

I think you meant 'at Damian.'

In the first mention of the Mermaid's Heart, you didn't put an apostrophe.

"'Cat go claws?'" I think you mean, "Cat's got claws?"

"Then brake up with him!"

I think you mean "break."

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I feel kind of bad for Natalie for loving someone else while dating someone else, that she had to resort to cheating on him. It is the dark side of love.
LexxiHart chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
I really enjoyed reading this!
I love your writing style. Paired with my weakness for cute romances, its perfect. 3
It's so elegant and sleek. Can't wait for more! :)
shinju asuka chapter 2 . 10/14/2015
Reread the first chapter and just realized it is only one shot. The first chapter really has potential to be interesting multi chapters story.
However i also enjoy reading the second chapter. Poor Jane. Bravo to how you ended this chapter!
deleted-account197 chapter 2 . 10/12/2015
These are so cute and sad. I really liked the Fred Damien part, because it was realistic. The second one was the best to now. I think it's good that you took up the lesbian part and it was sad with Gareth/Gary. Good work, and keep on writing : )