|Reviews for Crying on a Suitcase|
| zanybellecloudo chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
This is well written and I like the focused detail which is just enough to keep the story moving at the right pace. In many ways you want some indication as to why she's going, maybe a run through of the argument? It leaves a big gap in the story which I can't help but feel is important to feature. A good story none the less. Thanks for sharing!
| MTveit chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Wow. This story completely drew me in. The little details you use in the way you write make this story so authentic and well written. I was waiting, nervous alongside your protagonist, as s(he) struggled to get to her before she would be gone forever. And that ending - yes, it wasn't a HEA, but this one was even better; it made me think.
Thanks for sharing your work!