This is well written and I like the focused detail which is just enough to keep the story moving at the right pace. In many ways you want some indication as to why she's going, maybe a run through of the argument? It leaves a big gap in the story which I can't help but feel is important to feature. A good story none the less. Thanks for sharing!

Hi!

Wow. This story completely drew me in. The little details you use in the way you write make this story so authentic and well written. I was waiting, nervous alongside your protagonist, as s(he) struggled to get to her before she would be gone forever. And that ending - yes, it wasn't a HEA, but this one was even better; it made me think.

Thanks for sharing your work!