Reviews for Friend, Foe, or Food
Samantha Walters chapter 10 . 8/10/2016
Why would Caleb dear Zeph?! And so they will come back to Earth, Zeph admitted that in the last update of HoJ! I need more!

Thanks for being such a wonderful auther, but you've ruined me! I have such a hard time finding stories I like now!
geeyeahyeah chapter 10 . 3/28/2016
I finally found the time to finish this series, and I thought it was great! As a part of the HoGers, I am excited to see how Hand of Justice pans out. I thought it was cool how you meshed the stories together. Although the end did feel rushed, I'm glad you tied up some loose knots with your author's note at the end of this story. I like Maddie and Caleb's relationship, but I'm still team Anne and Zephyr all the way! You're an amazing writer with great ideas in your noggin. Keep up the good work! (But don't stress about it either!)
Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 10 . 3/21/2016
Hey again! Sorry for the late response. I hadn't even realized you had updated this story. Anyway, I'm glad how this ended and I loved the epilogue. It was just like how they have the end credits scene in Marvel movies. They always make me want to watch the next movie. Can I correctly assume that it's Zephyr? And that the 'golden dragon that is Death' mentioned is also Zephyr/the Hand of Justice?
The ending did seem a bit rushed and there are a few loose ends that could have been cleared up but I don't think they matter much. I didn't think that Sing would mind Maddie being Caleb's mate? Isn't he more of a moral compass for Caleb so he wouldn't drink from her blood? That's what I understood. I really did like Maddie and Caleb as characters and I think the world building on Earth is just as good as on Gaia.
Well, I can't wait for Hand of Justice but, honestly, take your time. If your job involves lots of writing don't feel you have to push yourself to write Hand of Justice. Until next time. Novela.
slcjnk2008 chapter 10 . 3/3/2016
I love this world you have created. And I look forward to reading your future stories when you feel up to writing them.
slcjnk2008 chapter 9 . 3/3/2016
Yes I felt it was rushed as well, but since you have created this wonderful world, is it possible that we could hear from them again?
kasperlassie chapter 10 . 2/26/2016
ZEPHYR. FINALLY someone to talk some sense into Caleb! Hopefully! When he and Anne get back to Earth!
deets1 chapter 10 . 2/18/2016
I am so excited. I squealed in front of people in my dorm. They're younger and I'm president. Soooo excited! Anne will have such a surprise when those two see each other again. :)
Valinedel chapter 10 . 2/17/2016
Apparently you have adopted some cubi powers and read my reaction exactly! Zeph is a golden dragon?! Can't wait until HOJ starts. Now that I know how you CAN write, I wonder if HOJ will be more..graphic than HOG. speaking of which, as far as your explicit scenes, how can I review something that makes me blush and yet I go back and read a second time (which I had no idea fp alerted you too -HAH guilty)! Overall I liked this story, but some scenes sure did happen fast (like when Maddie agreed to touch herself in front of the "monster"). While I understand you trying to make her level headed, it just seemed so rushed - as well as the ending but hey, you knew that already. I did like the epilogue though. If I remember correctly, this is a story you had sort of written out way b4 HOG and added the coorelations later. My I recommend leaving the heavy religious undertones to this one and not bringing them into HOJ? Just my opinion, but I though HOG had just the right amount. Keep up the great writing!
geeyeahyeah chapter 8 . 1/19/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm glad that Maddie was able to somewhat overcome that barrier of strangeness in order to accept Caleb, and to gtfo of that prison. Those tentacles though... even if it's for "Her Pleasure", I can't fully accept it yet. Hah. Great work though, thanks for mentioning that Caleb "accidentally" bonded with Maddie. I thought he knew what he was doing. Oh, and it has enough mature content that it wasn't too too much, or too little.
kasperlassie chapter 8 . 1/17/2016
The tentacles have come into plaaaaaaaaaay! I can understand where Maddie's coming from since he IS her bf and stuff and it's the fastest way out of being locked up. I'm looking forward to the fallout from the binding showing up!
slcjnk2008 chapter 2 . 1/12/2016
This story is great so far. I love your creativity and ability to fascinate and intrigue your readers with orginal writings.
On to the next chapter.
Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 7 . 1/2/2016
You're right, the scene was pretty good. But I am so confused. Is it Caleb? Isn't it? I thought it was someone else!
Stendhal Syndrome chapter 7 . 12/27/2015
I actually didn't figure out that it was Caleb, so points for taking me by surprise? Not completely sure if I prefer that it was him and not just another like him. I suppose there are reasons behind this type of reveal. I would imagine that this would put a damper on her level of trust with him. Though I guess I'll have to wait out for her reaction.
kasperlassie chapter 7 . 12/27/2015
What the hell is happening right now? I definitely was expecting some serious rescue tactics from Caleb but I guess he got locked up too? Except that now he's interested in gaining sexual energy from her? What would his cat say about this? He'd be livid!
deets1 chapter 7 . 12/27/2015
Duuuuuuude. I knew it was the same creature as Caleb, but that was it. I think my brain refused to believe that it was actually him. Or rather, my brain didn't entertain it as a possibility. Holy shit... this is terrible. How could they. Yes. This is good. This is very good. Cruel but good. What a reveal. Wait what if this pushes Caleb further to the dark side? I don't need this in my life.

But such a good plot development. I love it. Every chapter of this fic is highly enjoyable, and I really appreciate that. It was an okay M scenes. Your M scenes are fine. They're not cringeworthy, and they are descriptive and convey the thing. You know. I have no problems with them.

Thanks for writing,
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