well written, continuity is excellent, characters so far seem well rounded waitimg for the next chapter

Yay! Update!

I'm quite addicted to your story. I can't wait to find out where all of this is leading!

Fascinating worldbuilding and characters. Loving the plot so far. I look forward to seeing where you take all of this!

I bet he's gonna run out of there with no pants, poor kid

So 19 is like 13 in our years?

Wow, that was crazy. The way you write makes it easy to imagine everything.

I half expected her to say, "I'm allowed to help you help her." Lol

I like these characters so far. I'm just gonna throw this out there, but are these three like the sun, earth, and the moon?

Nice writing, looking forward to more, and some explanation! I'm surprised there arnt more reviews, this is really good.

Wow, this looks like a nice story so far. I kind of wish that I had the chance to live in a future like this...

Great start! I'm interested to know more about "Billy"