Reviews for The Heart of Dedication
Bob Story Builder chapter 3 . 1/4/2016
Well, well, well. My reaction was chills. This little trilogy was wonderful to read. Vivid imagery and emotion. Well done, Ice.
Bob Story Builder chapter 2 . 1/3/2016
This gave me the chills. Reminded me of I don't know what. The imagery is spectacular! It is vague and concrete at the same time a bit similar to a montage. A fine poem.
EWindheim chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
I really, really like this. So beautifully, and powerfully written (and dark, as usual ;) ). Reminds me a lot of my Winged Guardian Poems. You might enjoy them (the first one is the first poem I ever posted here). I love the last stanza.
EWindheim chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
So far, this one is my favorite :) It reminds me very much of my Winged Guardian series (the first poem at the very bottom of my very long list of poems). I really liked these lines:

My love is a heart that bleeds
And my fear is of demons that breed
EWindheim chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
I like the idea of amour cracking. It's a good image and works really well here. I also like how you compare love to a sword.
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
I read this as a Disney song. Good poem.