|Reviews for Contracts: Truth Lies|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
""Damn it[,]" she said in [frustration.]. "The [guys] [aren't] going to like this."" (Missing comma and three spelling errors)
This is a pretty solid chapter, and you do a good job of setting the scene and introducing me to your characters. Overall, I would suggest looking at both your paragraph length (some are very large) and sentence length (some are ver short. Short has its uses, but try to vary it up a bit.).
Nice start. Well done.
| firefighterjohn chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
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