Reviews for Intelligent, Resourceful, Expendable
HarryL chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
Feels good to be getting started, doesn't it?
So. Aliens. This is gonna be fun.
Nice drunk-talk. You've gotten really good at making dialogue feel real. Felt kinda all-over-the-place until the alien incident came 'round to focus things, but maybe that's the point.
Oh, and is this alien the monster from the prologue? Is the black kid Quentin Holmes and, if so, is he a relative/descendant of Odetta Holmes/Detta Walker/Susannah Dean?
BTW, I HAVE done work on my own, but it's a little light. Gonna make my first post tomorrow when I've got something like a first chapter done.