Reviews for Lighthouse
RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
It sweetly expresses the core and meaning of "love" that's not just simply used. You have used some beautiful metaphor and imagery and I'm glad that I've read it :)
It express the crave and the profound longing the narrator has for the voyager.
That's just amazingly amazing !
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Sweet and hopeful. The metaphor is persistent.
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
This is beautiful and so true... A love that is so genuine that it is willing to wait. Of course, it could also be deluded and very sad but that's what literature does.

Your readers will be thinking so many things at one time, but I am sure they will all agree that you did a very good job and hopefully it will make them think twice before they misuse the words "I love you."