Reviews for The Sparrow: A Mafia Novella |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what will happen for them. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for the update! However, I have to ask, is this really the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad she is awake. I wonder what his father wants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Angela will be okay. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this first chapter. Love how it was well paced, not too fast or way too slow. Angela is a likeable character so far, not annoying, though unless I am mistaking Liam likes her, and she doesn't know. For the detective she wants to be, I find it hilarious she hasn't put that together, but it's only natural and realistic because it happens to us all the time. I'm also curious about Laura, if I am going to be reading more about her and what is going to happen now? Great Job! First chapter down, nineteen more to go :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Maybe his father set that up hoping she would push him out of the way, using that as his way to get rid of her. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ange. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this chapter. Nice length too. It's really interesting to read the conflict Angela was inside herself when it comes to her love for Tino. And I think you should totally go with the Mafia Novel. It aligns with the theme you have going with this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sure he's not going to let her out of his sight anytime soon. Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Who has the gun on her? Where is Marco? Can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot to say...I miss the really long chapters you posted at the beginning! I love long chapters, they allow for everything to be more descriptive and for the story to go into more detail. I would love if you made them longer! But that's just my opinion, whether short or long I will surely read anyway ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() After a lot of binge reading, I'm all caught up with the story! Like I already said, I am enjoying it very much! More people should have read this story, it hooks the reader easily! Fantastic job, keep it up and please update soon! |