Reviews for Thinking Class
childofdeath2 chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
Oh gosh this poem is amazing and it basically describes how my family I think.
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
I really liked this poem and the message. I 3 the rhyme and flow of it also. Great job.
atalantea chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
Great rhythm, great imagery. I really really like the cobweb line. Its a (dare I say) fresh twist or new approach to brains and cobwebs. Good, solid job.

On the 11th line, I think you meant "That the" instead of "The the"

Keep writing!