|Reviews for The Traveler (Short Story)|
| Carter.Hook chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
hi ur story is shit go killyourself stupid fat idiot. I read it and I wanted to kill myself so I did but this fucking story was so bad it brought me back to life... please make it into a full story and we will have the elixir of endless life at our fingertips go fuck yourself
| FreddeyLee chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
I would very much like to see this. Keep it up, I know full well how much writers block sucks
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
The concept is good, but it's weird when the author's note is longer than the piece itself.
| JessaGrey chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
I thought it was really intriguing. Could definitely make for an interesting story!