|Reviews for Sinking Redemption|
| Aristeian chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
Wow. Nice. Very nice.
loved it actually. Short but impactful.
One suggestion though; you could change your summary to the last line of your story
.it would make it more enticing to prospective readers. Because your story is much better than what the sort of vague summary implies. (I am sorry I mean no offence! )
But very nice. :)
| cardiff1984 chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
It appears however Charles tried live, it was a no win situation. Was Love from someone else really the final straw for him? He was given a gift of life, but he's just taking the easy way out, because he thinks it will keep his pride with God.
Always love the conclusion in your stories.
| rubyrosa chapter 1 . 11/7/2015