Reviews for The Undisciplined Haiku
LostCriesofTime chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
This is very powerful. A message I think many people should hear. Beautifully done, very thought provoking.
theweekendpoetry chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
A creative and refreshing poetry about self-love. This put a smile on my face.
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Good to see you posting again. This poem speaks of many possibilities.
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Blunt and powerful... There is a lot of strength in just being satisfied with where you are...

I'd like to add that "just because one could have been in a better place at a time, doesn't mean that person is doomed to never get there... The theme I feel from your piece is "take each day as it comes."
sreeja chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
wow