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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Devil in the Details" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm. Discord: lili365 Instagram: lili_36.5 Email: |
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![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I still wouldn't change anything. The end fits to this story. Riesa got her life back, but without Phil. Just her luck that she cannot be with him. Keep writing. Can't wait for the next story. |
![]() ![]() I want to know how it ends does she this is too good to end like this |
![]() ![]() i saw this one coming but the suspense to get her is what made this story enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She must have really believed that giving up her memories would stop the demon who cursed her family, unless that was just an unfortunate side effect. With how adept she seems to be at spellcasting, it seems less likely this was an accident and more likely a sacrifice. Something is going on with Greg, Holly, and her little boy. Perhaps the boy has a demon visitor at night? I hope the mojo bag works for him. Thank you for the chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, that's interesting. I wonder who was brought back from the dead as someone or something else...that deer was surely sacrificed by someone for some nefarious purpose. Mr. Davenport is a very likeable character. Still, I feel like they should discover the source before repairs are done...just a money pit if something in the house is causing it, like a hexed or cursed item. What a nice, long addition to the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Red is kind of a loveable demon. It is interesting to learn about the world you've created. I wonder if this soul-link thing they have going on is the reason she is so drawn to him so much? At least that crisis was averted, although by whom will be interesting to find out. Double dose of thanks for the good read :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot thickens...at least the ward worked and Riesa has some means of protecting herself. Although not enough, it seems! Alone time with Red. That seems dangerous...I hope she listens to Clarice. Thank you for another well-written chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter definitely confirms the fact that Greg is no good. Clarice is obviously a hoodoo master, and would have her home and gate warded to keep evil away. Still not sure what to make of Red or the little spark shared between him and Riesa. Clarice is the only one she can trust at this point. Yet another excellent addition to the story. Just wanted to reiterate that I appreciate the writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like Riesa is feeling some healthy skepticism about Red. By appearances, he seems to be an okay guy, but he is a demon so you never know. And who better to have conducted such satanic things with an animal carcass than a demon? I'm leaning more towards Greg as the culprit. She should go to Clarice's house alone to get the answers she wants. If Greg isn't in on this, he knows nothing about the situation so how is she going to explain that she is missing crucial parts of her memory? Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm starting to get a weird feeling about Greg. Animals are usually great judges of character. If Jasper doesn't like him, there is definitely a reason. Also, he is the bearer of bad news. I feel like Greg might be the demon that cursed her family, or one of his minions... The picture becomes clearer regarding Red. He is at least showing a neutral evil disposition, one of selfishness and self-preservation. So far, I'm worried that Riesa has no one she can truly trust in this situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like Red knows more than he is letting on. Maybe not intentionally, since he seems to be muddling about with no real idea of what is going on, but he could at least explain some things about the supernatural world so Riesa could get her bearings. It is good to know that she may be regaining some of her memories. I wonder if she truly wants to know what happened all those years ago. It sounds like her family, and especially her grandfather, were into some shady magical stuff. It will be interesting to see what her ancestors did to warrant the wrath of a powerful demon enough to curse her family like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is taking an interesting turn, for sure. Red doesn't seem to act like a normal demon. I would find it unsettling to be connected to a demon, regardless of what he acted like. One wonders why he wants to look around, and why her younger self felt the need to lock him up in that book in the first place... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I have to say that I love your story so far, and I appreciate that you've put so much time and effort into writing quality content. As a fellow publisher of stories, I know how long it takes to compile chapters of this magnitude. I truly am enjoying the story. |