Reviews for The House Sparrow
TVH Bookfan chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
This was a good idea for a poem. Many people understand how certain birds are being threatened by humans and like writing poems based on that, but trying to show how animals can be like humans in terms of their more negative traits is something we don't see very often.
Be careful about capitalizing the first word in each line. We talked a little about this when we were selecting poems for my college's literary magazine this semester, and some poems ended up being rejected in part because of this.
Besides this, I think you did well. With a little more work, and lots of revision, you can continue getting better as a poet.