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Thorn Dancer
ingridkonstantine
chapter 1 .
11/10/2015
Great beginning to the story, I definitely would love to read more. Just one word of criticism: Sometimes your sentences tend to get a bit long and run- on. The story would be an easier read if you could fix that.