Reviews for On the Cusp
Bob Story Builder chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
I like that you alternate between the mind and time making everything meld together.
EWindheim chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
I love the way you take an idea and use metaphor and imagry to expand it and explore it. The best poetry (in my humble opinon) comes from doing this. I got a little confused at a few places, but it didn't take away from the poem. My favorite stanza:

The planes allowed to rule
For the very idea that they might
Frightened hands hold on so tight
Crush that which is desired most
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
This poem has its own intensity when your other poetry have emotional intensity. I cannot name the intensity but it is distinct. The poem is one that I will go back to again and again to think on, which I appreciate. Awesome poem!