|Reviews for I Broke A Good Man's Heart|
| RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Wow! I must say you excel in romances! Actually this is my favorite genre and I too always wanted to flare at this genre.
By the way, coming to the shot, I toooooo want someone to love me like that with so many good qualities and elites with etiquette. :"D
He loved her, but the sad fact was she was incapable of returning the same. She was down knowing that someone else was far better than her. ...Hmm
Makes me wonder...
| Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Oh wow, impressive, as usual, with a very interesting twist at the end.
No really, the last line seriously leaves a mark and that's definitely how you know you've written an exceptional work of art.
| John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
I love this piece. An honest reflection of the thorns which love can prick us with - our good intentions made irrelevant. I've been meaning to write a similar poem.
| asblackassin chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
That last line is simply beautiful, especially with the reiteration/repetition from the beginning. Hauntingly so.
| The Wanderer chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Wow. I'm just blown away by this. I clicked it wondering what 271 words would look like but leave thoroughly impressed. Thought you outta know. Good work!
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Fresh angle on trope of breaking hearts. I like the twist. Well written piece.