Reviews for I Broke A Good Man's Heart
RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Wow! I must say you excel in romances! Actually this is my favorite genre and I too always wanted to flare at this genre.
By the way, coming to the shot, I toooooo want someone to love me like that with so many good qualities and elites with etiquette. :"D
He loved her, but the sad fact was she was incapable of returning the same. She was down knowing that someone else was far better than her. ...Hmm
Makes me wonder...
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Oh wow, impressive, as usual, with a very interesting twist at the end.

No really, the last line seriously leaves a mark and that's definitely how you know you've written an exceptional work of art.
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
I love this piece. An honest reflection of the thorns which love can prick us with - our good intentions made irrelevant. I've been meaning to write a similar poem.
asblackassin chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
That last line is simply beautiful, especially with the reiteration/repetition from the beginning. Hauntingly so.
The Wanderer chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Wow. I'm just blown away by this. I clicked it wondering what 271 words would look like but leave thoroughly impressed. Thought you outta know. Good work!
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Fresh angle on trope of breaking hearts. I like the twist. Well written piece.