Reviews for First Sights
AnonymousProclamations chapter 2 . 11/24/2015
Did you just give me a chapter shout out? I've never been in one before (though I am an avid reviewer). Thanks so much! I feel so special!

I thought that it would be the new love interested, not Pike. Alright then, I will not worry too much about supernatural wonders. . . though you had me already at the curse breakers and different types of shifters. Do whatever works for you!

I don't know about other people, but I like how it seems to the point and is easy to digest. I don't like things that are over clouded or fluffy with descriptions. I feel like what you have here is direct, but works well for a short story. I didn't see any really glaring grammar mistakes.

"I'm a friendly . . . it" - - - drop a unless it is a dialect thing.

I was confused where Zeke is standing and bending down. I think the scene needs more (not too many) descriptions about the place itself and maybe more about what they are wearing.

I'm pretty interested in that hanger at the end. The relationship of the father and son are so tense; it is frightening to watch. I thought he was going to kill him and maybe Zeke was going to step in. I'm glad it didn't get too bad. I feel like Ian is very cynical and defensive which I can see in this sort of teenager. I hope that things turn up for him.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
V is for the 5th chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
This certainly looks interesting (and slash, yay~) kinda strikes me as a sequel though, so now I've gotta hunt around to see if I'm right or not. In any case I'll be keeping an eye on this
AnonymousProclamations chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Ahaha The boyfriend right? At the end? Tell me I am right!

This is pretty interesting. I am not one for the super natural, but seems interesting. Up for any MxM. I don't know much about the supernatural world so this could be a learning experience for me.

I like your word choice so far and the pace. Good indirect characterization here as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
LadyHazellyn chapter 1 . 11/16/2015