Reviews for Sonnet: From the Witch to Rapunzel
shadewithoutcolor chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Oh this is sooo cool! I love how creepy the tone is :D
SeaTurtle77 chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
What a lovely recounting of a classic story in sonnet. Your iambic pentameter is slightly off, but I understand it's almost impossible to achieve perfection with this highly difficult art form. I like how you kept the words truthful- how you did not take either the side of the witch nor the side of Rapunzel, but gave the witch her own voice instead of stating the black-and-white. In this poem, the character of the witch isn't like Disney's distasteful re-imagination of the story, where the witch is clearly evil and the captive is definitively innocent.
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Usually I don't care for poetry, but wow. Excellent job.