Reviews for Broken strands
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
For a while at the start I thought you were going to make me sad again with yet another unrequited love story, but whew, it was a happy ending again! I always prefer those, even if the sad ending might make more sense. The MC paused to think, and that saved him, because looking back he'd have seen that it was a moment of weakness, of too many bad things happening all at once to overwhelm him, and that he had a chance still, all he had to do was fight for her. Then again that night of passion could have a bad ending as well, the new BF could be a psycho who'll kill the girl for 'betraying' him, but hey, for now everyone is HAPPY.
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
This was sweet, and I loved the ending (although I was worried the parents would be around - they are in High school after all!). I'm glad she got away from what seemed like a manipulative boyfriend.
RosesAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
I really liked how the second person POV made the narrative feel more real. Good choice.
SkipperCal3 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Oh my word!
Another beautifully written piece.
Thus was truly exquisite.
A perfect build up behind the saying - hanging on by a thread!