|Reviews for The Codex Magistrate|
| ur mom chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
s/3282419/1/Wolf-blood read this
| Dragon Kaiju Prince chapter 20 . 9/18/2016
This was an interesting story I've just read, I've always enjoyed reading the different lores of fantasy worlds (especially lore books in the Elder Scrolls series which I find some similarities to your fantasy world) I haven't read your main story (The Last Witch Hunter) before but after reading this I think I would like to give it a try. Do you plan to write any more chapters for this story (The Codex Magistrate)?
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
This is an interesting way to start your story. You've done a good job of making no me feel like I understand the personality of your narrator. One of the main dangers of the first person narrative is that we can fall into the trap of starting almost every sentence and thought with "I", and I did notice a bit of that, so my main suggestion would be to see if any sentences can be reworked for a little variety.
That being said, this was well written. Nice job!