So cute. it has this perfect amount of freshness and humour. Btw he can read minds right? I love how you revealed it to us in the second chapter without actually saying it. That's a great way to write. Omg I will never forget Allison. XD

Two point five children? How is it possible to have HALF of a child?

I'm soooo happy I found your story it's absolutely wonderful and adorable and I just ahhh it's so good. I've been looking for a story like this for awhile and it's perfect there isnt one but I didn't like. Bless your soul

Beautiful, but I feel you rushed through it so...

I want cry...Its besttt... I love it so muchhhh

I'm internally screaming my head off right now as it is 3 am and waking up my parents is a big no-no but damn does this story tempt my self-control. This was one of the most adorkable things I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Allison was just such a cutie and though Sora was really chill, Allison–for me–won the competition hands down. Anyway, I hope you continue writing as this was also well-written!

Just so you know, this is actually like one of my favourite one-shots ever and this comes from a girl who will read romance one-shots for like 4 hours straight. Love love love it! And the ending makes me laugh (although really I was smiling throughout like all of this).
Excited to read whatever else you write/have written _

"Dear God, Allison. Stop already."
Dear writer, send help, I'm drowning in feels!

This is so beautiful. Like, this could be an manga and I would buy every copy for no good reason. This is so great. I like the cat. He's got a good taste in food.

I thought you said "all of the paintings were gross" instead of gorgeous and I was like wut XDD

SO
FREAKING
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
CUTENESS
FLUFFINESS
OVERLOAD
YOU'VE BROKEN ME
ESPECIALLY AT THE END WHEN SOREN TRIES TO BE ALL POETIC AND NICE AND IS LIKE 'Forever and ever until I died." AND THEN ALLISON'S LIKE "YOU CAN'T DIE!"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
SO
CUTE

1. I'm not happy. I was late for the bus because I was reading this story.
2. "Ear-pierced ears?" WUT IZ DIS?!
3. "...you see, this is what happened-" "No need to explain anything." There needs to be a new paragraph here. Different speakers.
4. What the frick are you doing up at 4:45?!

lol hi
Love Allison XD she's crazy