Reviews for Kid Taker
Ckh chapter 1 . 7/8/2018
Creepy, but my sadistic side likes it. An effective poem using the minimal amount of words to paint a dark setting.

"she was the one" - I can picture a man in a corner smiling, his arms pressed together to concoct some sort of devious plan.
Little Doctor chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
Suspenseful and slightly creepy, methinks I canno' wait for the next bit!
Crimson While Stealing chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Even though it was short; I love your writing. I think it is of the way you made things rhyme somehow.
My poems are mostly consist of lines since if I tried to write words like you; which I tried; it turns out horrible.
But let's just say,
I pity the poor girl. And I love your writing.

Especially poems. Poetry is harder than writing ; in my opinion.
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
That was a good poem!
echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Creeeeeepy. So so so creepy. Reminds me of the movie The Call about the girl who gets abducted. Man this is so scary I'm gonna have nightmares.

Good work!

TotoDaDog chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
I really liked this poem! It mean me feel scared inside, to think about this "kid taker"

I wonder what "she was the one" meant, I guess I'll ever know, but it gives the poem a mysterious aspect.

Really liked it.

BradytheJust chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Oh my good God!
Woah, this poem was wonderful and scary and wow...
Great job as usual, and the emotion behind this poem hits you like a freight train. Keep it up :)