|Reviews for Kid Taker|
| Ckh chapter 1 . 7/8/2018
Creepy, but my sadistic side likes it. An effective poem using the minimal amount of words to paint a dark setting.
"she was the one" - I can picture a man in a corner smiling, his arms pressed together to concoct some sort of devious plan.
| Little Doctor chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
Suspenseful and slightly creepy, methinks I canno' wait for the next bit!
| Crimson While Stealing chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Even though it was short; I love your writing. I think it is of the way you made things rhyme somehow.
My poems are mostly consist of lines since if I tried to write words like you; which I tried; it turns out horrible.
But let's just say,
I pity the poor girl. And I love your writing.
Especially poems. Poetry is harder than writing ; in my opinion.
| C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
That was a good poem!
| echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Creeeeeepy. So so so creepy. Reminds me of the movie The Call about the girl who gets abducted. Man this is so scary I'm gonna have nightmares.
| TotoDaDog chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
I really liked this poem! It mean me feel scared inside, to think about this "kid taker"
I wonder what "she was the one" meant, I guess I'll ever know, but it gives the poem a mysterious aspect.
Really liked it.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Oh my good God!
Woah, this poem was wonderful and scary and wow...
Great job as usual, and the emotion behind this poem hits you like a freight train. Keep it up :)