Reviews for A Beautiful Christmas Night
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
A few small corrections: [someone] instead of "some one who loves..." As well as "To come down to us[,] / there would be no..." A comma instead of a period here is probably more correct.

Other than that, this flowed well and was well written. Well done.
resting-in-daisies chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
Very nice!