Reviews for Stuck In The Mud
EWindheim chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
This starts off well, but seem to get stuck (as it were) with the rhyme scheme. Also, I'm not a fan of the last line, which deviates from the rhyming and seems a bit out of place. I would suggest flushing this out more. You've got a great start, don't be afraid to flush it out! :)