Reviews for Oh Ye Foul Vampires
Ckh chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
"Or the salt I will get." - a humourous line to close things off I feel. I like how the vampire is portrayed as this Frankenstein of animals, this unnatural being that does not belong to nature. If you need more salt to banish this otherwordly creature, I have more salt at home.
PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
Great poem. I like how you mixed in elements of vampire lore from multiple regions in the imagery you used as well as the use of simile and metaphor
CMfan5000 chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Pretty good for outside your comfort zone when you are tired!
There are things I would change, but poetry is not my strong suit either, so I will not call them 'wrong'.
I'm overly fond of rhyming in poetry so, personally I would like a stronger rhyme scheme.
Thanks for the effort.