|Reviews for Shadows of the Mind
| lirianstar chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
When will this be updated? Or published? (Waiting is agonyyyyyyy)
| Joyce.RE chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
| Cura chapter 2 . 4/9/2016
I just wanted to tell you, I got an email I was alerted you updated, and I saw you were published with Born to Be Bred! I had read it awhile back, and lovvved how fresh it was for me to read this shifter fic! I wanted to take the time to tell you congratulations, and say how I LOVE this new story, Shadows of the Mind! I was so impressed by the way the story is told through our main characters eyes and world view, and how eloquently it is written! I hadn't been inspired by something I've read in quite a while, and this story kicked me awake from my reading slumber!
| sini chapter 2 . 3/29/2016
so when will you update this? because I have been waiting for awhile lol
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/24/2016
Please update very soon.
| tootalltoobetrue chapter 2 . 2/15/2016
Wow what is happening I'm kind of confused who is the invisible man? Please update soon !
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
What is wrong exactly? You have not been on any website since January 13th.
| Claire'sbestfriend chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Please update ASAP
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
Wow, this is another month and no update?
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/29/2016
| priscent chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
I signed up just so I could favorite/follow your stories. It's sooo hard to find web fiction that reads like fiction :/
Also, I can't help but notice how the protagonists in your works never seem to catch any sort of break... ever. Have you had any thoughts on whether you intend to buck the trend at any point in any of the stories?
| Lily chapter 2 . 1/25/2016
What is her name?
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2016
| Kenau chapter 2 . 1/17/2016
The way you described her inner turmoil (and how it's reflected in surroundings or at least her perception of it), the cleansing ritual and the flight was absolutely captivating. The deflowering and rutting initiated by unseen force / being - less disturbing than intriguing. Raises a lot of questions about a demon's motivation - is it a display of power? Just an opportunity? Something else?
And yet another cliffhanger. Ugh... It's really a heavy toll for my patience, but we have to endure, don't we?
Can't wait to meet the rapist demon and have a glimpse of his schemes and themes, cause it's clear those soldiers are connected with him. Underlings or worshippers, I wonder?
Outstanding chapter of the outstanding story!
| Kenau chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
This looks very promising. I must admit I was thrilled to notice your new story, cause I learned to love every single one of yours and with this tribal / shamanistic yet magical approach this one is bound to swiftly become my favorite.
I appreciate the tiny details - from mentioning of mundane chores and stories shared by fire in witch's yurt, through the indigo paste, to the motive of sibling betrayal and the unintentional murder. And the curses thrown at the chosen one are true gems - "washed away by storms", "crushed under a mountain". Beautiful.
Hovren's words intrigue me - "the witch was eaten by a bear" prophecy as much as "the old ways" breeding, which is easier to decipher but still mysterious. Who is Streg? A new god? Lord? Something between? What have transpired when young witch came in contact with her brother's blood?
Can the protagonist be even called a witch if her training was so abruptly stopped? How rare are the witches? How many generations have passed since introduction of 'new ways' that they are so secluded?
I'm fully aware you are not going to answer all my questions any time soon (or ever), but nonetheless I will await nest chapter(s) with great anticipation.