Reviews for Sharpest Edge
Camille Xx chapter 2 . 8/23/2017
Hey Caitlin I finally got round to reading this! It's really good; not the kind of story I normally read but so far it seems really good, so I'm gonna give it a try and plus I know you're really talented so you might win me over :P see ya in September and congrats on this great storyline! 3 lots of love, Caramella xox
Gorilla0132 chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
Get this published and I guarantee it will be the next huge YA craze following Divergent. This could be HUGE!
ncpete chapter 53 . 9/25/2016
Interesting story. The social structure is different, population control via a designed in game making murder legal. That the story is told through the ramblings of a 16 year old girl takes some of the internal conversation in circles, but overall not bad. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
ThreeDigitNumber chapter 54 . 7/18/2016
Ur welcome xD
ThreeDigitNumber chapter 53 . 7/18/2016
Omg I am breathless
ThreeDigitNumber chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
i'm really scared you guys are just gonna give away everything in DT or smth - I'M REALLY ENJOYING IT XD
Calefe chapter 54 . 6/21/2016
No, thank YOU, because this was an amazing story to read. You better publish it, or else I'll come after you.
DaAwesomeGurl chapter 54 . 5/23/2016
SUZZAWARD NOOOOOOOOOOOO
OH GOD I CRIED SO HARD I MEAN I EXPECTED IT BUT YOU MADE IT SO SAD I AM JUST

*Sobs*

*Sobs a bit more*

DEADLY EDGE WILL BE SOOOON

YAY

CANT WAIT

You've seen my actual reaction whihc is too much to put in a review so yahhh...

You're welcome for reading,you know I would always support ur stories (including holding a publisher at gunpoint to get your books published)

:D

Stay amazing xx
Da Kaleidoscope chapter 52 . 5/20/2016
Is there some law that:
1. All chapters must be unsatisfying short?
2. Every chapter must end in a cliff hanger?
3. All ads must be video ads that lag my computer like crazy?
Da Kaleidoscope chapter 51 . 5/20/2016
God dangit how long are you going to drag this on?
DaAwesomeGurl chapter 50 . 5/20/2016
WAT
WAT
WATWATWATWATWATWAT
THE ACTUAL
*********************
I KNEW IT
SUZZANAH'S DEAD FOR
NUUUUUUUUUUUU
I KNEW IT
I'M SO FREAKING RIGHT AND IM JUST A SO ANGRY AND IM TRYING NOT TO STRANGLE YOU BECAUSE YOU'RE JUST ONE SEAT AWAY AND CAN IF I WANT TO YOU JUST SPOKE TO ME AND I AM DOING A GREAT JOB AT KEEPING A STRAIGHT FACE BUT HELL UR IN TROUBLE...KINDA
WELL BETTER SUZZANAH THAN BAKE...
BECAUSE BAKE IS JUST FREAKING AMAZING
AND THEN HERE I AM, JUST GOING:
WATWATWATWATWATWATJUSTHAPPENED
IT WAS SO ACTION PACKED I LOVE IT ONE OF MY FAVE CHAPPIES IN TERMS OF WRITING STYLE BUT NOT I REPEAT NOT WHAT HAPPENED BECAUSE NO ONE SHOULD DIE AND MAKE ME SAD
I KNOW SHE'LL DIE...IF YOU CONFIRM SHE DOES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER...I WILL PAY HER A TRIBUTE AND I WILL DRAW SUZZANAH FOR YOU
SOOOOOOZ
:'(
messa sad.
and, by the way...

...watch your back.
RogueUnicorn764 chapter 50 . 5/19/2016
Ok well I promised to review on chapter 50 and after the weeks have gone by, here it is. I'll leave the rage and death threats for a little bit but you might want to avoid me at school tomorrow and all of next week.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It is completely unique and amazing. I've had difficulty concentrating on reading recently yet I have been able to read every new chapter as soon as it comes out. Don't you ever stop writing (except for exam week which is an exception) because if you do then don't come in on a Wednesday or a Thursday. (Sorry for the death threat.) I'm not joking when I say this but you need to be a writer when you grow up. I don't care if people say otherwise, you have a real talent for writing and keeping the reader interested. Also when you publish your first book, can I have a copy?

Now for the death threats and rage...

WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL! YOU CANNOT END IT THERE! I'VE GUESSED WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT BUT YOU CAN'T END IT THERE LIKE THAT! HOW DARE YOU! I SWEAR TO GOD IF YOU PUT SOME HUGE PLOT TWIST IN LIKE DEREK BEING A BAD GUY OR SOMETHING THEN I WILL FULL ON MURDER YOU JUST LIKE VIVIAN DID ADAM. IF YOU SUDDENLY SWITCH TO SOME OTHER TOPIC IN THE NEXT CHAPTER THEN YOU WON'T SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY AGAIN! I HATE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AND YOU HAVE TK FINISH THIS BEFORE EXAMS OR... OR... OR I'LL... I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'LL DO BUT IT'LL BE BAD! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU SO MUCH! WATCH YOUR BACK TOMORROW!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I HATE YOU SO MUCH!

KSFJDJHFNSLAALDKDNDISNDHDBDKANSLSLALDNJDNDVDCJHSGQYWIDKFBALSNDKSNDKSNCUXNDLXOAKAIAPAUDUSJCNCJSGSGTATASJNDNFLSPSUDUDJDJDJNXNCJFISKSLSKSKDJDJDJDBSKALPAOWUEUFIDJMSSBSHHSJS!'!/:;)$: :):$:&: : .,'. ""- &&:'!

Also I'm really looking forwards to the next story, I won't say anything incase people here don't know but... Also is anything going to happen with Derian? Derek's not really been involved much lately and it's sad, I miss him. Also if you've killed Suzanna I will kill you! She got drunk! How can you kill her?!
DAAWESOMEGURL chapter 48 . 5/17/2016
is it just me, or is viv being INCREDIBLY DUMB BY ALL THAT STUPID RANT LIKE GURL JUST MAN UP AND STOP BEING DEPRESSED NO ON EHATES YOU FOR THIS YOU HAD NO CHOICE SO JUST

UG.

i am shaking...i need the next chapter! i need more action and some BADASS fighting!
go jake!
do it for bake!

i can't believe derek has absolutely no idea that viv is actually in this...
he thinks she's DOING HOMEWORK
LOLL
but yeah. great chapter. make viv woman up.

so yeah.

NEXT CHAPTER PLSSS
DaAwesomeGurl chapter 49 . 5/18/2016
SHE SUCEEDED YAY

GO SOOZ!

that little line about hw inspired by yots truly ;)

GO EVERYONEEEEEEE

I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
Da Kaleidoscope chapter 48 . 5/16/2016
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