Reviews for Alexis Apocalypse
LDF chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
[The ebony-haired woman immediately obeys and drops to the ground; her straight inky tresses spill over her face as she kisses the earth.]

Make sure to use sentence-connecting semicolons sparingly and only when the ideas in the clauses are inseparable.

[curly blonde hair]

Use ‘blond’ rather than ‘blonde’, as the former is the more accepted form of spelling.