|Reviews for Alexis Apocalypse|
| LDF chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
[The ebony-haired woman immediately obeys and drops to the ground; her straight inky tresses spill over her face as she kisses the earth.]
Make sure to use sentence-connecting semicolons sparingly and only when the ideas in the clauses are inseparable.
[curly blonde hair]
Use ‘blond’ rather than ‘blonde’, as the former is the more accepted form of spelling.