Reviews for RAD - Rebel Against Dystopia
kumamon chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
A thing I noticed is that your sentences aren't separated too well. It seems a bit long, you should try to break them down so it doesn't feel so stiff. You focused on only one character, so we know who the protagonist is. I think you meant 'plane' instead of 'plain'. Just saying. Looking forward to future updates!
KimonoQueen chapter 1 . 1/23/2016
I liked this! It had clear imagery and strong emotions. It also got to the point quickly but with adequate pacing of backstory key to the protagonist's emtions/actions in that moment. Poor Reuben! The place he has been transported to looks sinister but the announcement was so polite lol I look forward to figuring this place out with him!
Sinlimitless chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Oh man, an interesting read. Will love to read more when you publish it! See ya!