|Reviews for Wanted: One Good Man|
| RomanticInterlude chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
Really like it. I'm starting to get sick of stories that are about some 'devastatingly handsome man' and that seems to be pretty much it.
Intriguing ending. Looking forward to more like this!
| ParisWhenItSizzles chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
The ending was very sudden... Not exactly sure what happened! But nice story :) You have a nice writing style and very varied vocabulary - made this very interesting :')
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Well that was a switch at the end! Rocket launchers pointed at her table?! Where on earth did that come from? I hope you continue this so I can figure out what's going on.
I would suggest you watch out for tense changes, as you swap from past to present to past and then back to present at the end.
An interesting start!