|Reviews for SSS|
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
This paints such a vivid picture. I feel like you could take this further, maybe connect the two a little more smoothly. You've captured a feeling and showed us that in a snapshot of 40 words - nice!
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
I like the swing in the way this flows. My only suggestion would be to add "but" to the start of the last line, but of course that is purely a stylistic choice. :)