Reviews for Pink & Orange |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. I also appreciate your detailed writing that wasn't boring. I find myself skipping whole paragraphs that others have written but not in this story. You make it important to her personality and/ or circumstance, and I appreciate it. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story, I really like it so far. I want to know what happens next! Please post soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a few things I am always looking for in stories; one, something I can personally relate to, and two, something that I, myself, can connect with reality. As much as I love to escape the world that I live in and go visit some alternate dimension where everything ends up like a fairytale, sometimes having something that I can see actually happening in the world makes me feel a little better. Especially with romances, I find that, whether you mean it or not, you raise expectations and start seeing how much your life isn't a novel and practically giving up with whatever expectations you come up with. I'm getting slightly off-topic here, so my point is, from what I've read, I've been able to connect the plot and the setting to reality, which personally excites me. Continuing. I, personally, don't see anything wrong with the writing or the spelling or the grammar. Not as though you need it, I just find that, as a writer, having my readers comment on mistakes and errors helps me improve throughout the story. Anyway, I love the story so far. I'm highly anticipating the next chapter, and I hope to read it soon. The best of luck, always. ~Lilith |