Reviews for Follow the Rules
RiverDiamandis chapter 17 . 5/19/2017
I love this story and the ending! And, i read it in one day and decided to write a review at the end of the story. i had never finished a story in the day i started lol i was just looking for a story that violence is in. and i found yours, so i enjoyed while Oliver getting beaten hahaha anyway i love your writing, i will read your other stories as well.
mickeywild chapter 17 . 4/9/2017
It was nice . I loved it .
R. Ficst chapter 17 . 10/15/2016
Very weird and twisted ending, but the whole thing is twisted, in an uncomfortable and deep way. Nice work.
firefox vixen chapter 17 . 4/26/2016
I cried chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
You wrote a warning and I thought I was prepared but I felt so bad for him. The ending-just cried. A great angusty story with a good ending. If anyone reads the review before the story. Go ahead, read the story. It's complete but be warned that it is sad.
Kari chapter 16 . 2/1/2016
Good story!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/15/2016
Poor Ollie, he was so feisty and he still couldn't protect himself. He did kind of suit having the tape on though ;)