Reviews for Babysat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I would like to invite you to join our platform to present a good quality story to our readers! Kindly send me a message if this offer piqued your interest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Team Erik you dummy! Don't change the ship! I want to read more of that sexually confused rich boy and Dustin good stuff! Update! |
![]() ![]() You updated I can't choose who to ship(teamerik) maybe Erik wins over Dustin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I haven't been updating. I will work on the next chapter tonight. |
![]() ![]() Yupp. You've gotten me hooked. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() The ending made it feel like a cliffhanger. I can't wait for your next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, and we'll about the boy topic Yeah, I've kinda been crushing on a guy since first grade so yeah, not much help in that department but I guess I like both in the aspects of this story Keep writing- XOXOX -BellaLovesNutella |
![]() ![]() We both have different definitions of mad. Lol Why didn't the parents mention Erik? I can't wait for your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to point out a small loophole here. In the first chapter, Joey's mother had said that their usual babysitter was out of town/country/something like that, so that's why I assumed Athena was real? Or did that just mean that Joey's grandmother/father's coworker was out of town? Idk, just something I noticed. Otherwise... Omg. Erik is so mysterious. Aaaahhhh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Dustin! He's so scared! Erik is so uncontrollable. I hope he realizes what he did. Poor Dustin. I wouldn't want to come back haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good. Keep on writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() My expressions- Cool, this is good God, he's annoying Wait, what? I SHIP IT I SHIP IT HARD LIKE TO THE MILLIONTH POWER |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why you'd say that we'd hate you at the end of this chapter. I thought that was actually amusing. I like it. I think he's really adorable with Joey and with kids. Although it has left me wondering why they need a babysitter when Joey has an older brother? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so so so good. I need more! :D |