Reviews for Don't Go
atalantea chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
You are consistent with the rhythm and rhymes. And the pain. Unrequitted love is something we all somehow share.
Keep writing!
Love,
Ata
Woedin chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
Only in poetry, song, art, or in-person can we reveal such deep feelings for another. At least for a few brave enough to express such passions. I think many have shared this experience, but lack the confidence, and gifts you display, in conveying these thoughts. Unrequited love hurts, and can inspire action. I enjoyed your offering, and wish you all the best my friend.