Reviews for Blue Hydrangea
RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Noticing the sadness at the end that I wasn't expecting.
Blue hydrangeas! Love them a lot.
All the things that he had done from reservation of seats to preparation of hot soups. I hope he liked her romantically! :')
The last scene made me sqeal, the way she was longing for him to say that he brought that pot for her and...it ended him giving it to another girl.
At the end, their silent journey to their home was all I could smile about. :)
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
If something is put on my desk, it is mine simple rule. I related to this. The ending was awkward and sad and painful to read. I had trouble with sentence "Does that mean they were all right?" because I don't know what it is modifying or referring to. Besides that well written.
Marisa Chuikova chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
While not grammatically sound 100% of the way, the errors do not detract, but rather highlight the raw, easily relatable feelings. Very well done)