Reviews for Jack and the Inferno
LDF chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
["I don't normally have any trouble with you Jack," he said without looking up. "You're a good student. So why are you suddenly falling asleep in my class."]

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I'm not really seeing how Jack falling asleep once in class is a cause for concern. It would make more sense if this was a common occurrence that it becomes a distraction and a cause for concern. No one is really going to make fun of or flip out over him struggling to stay awake during one lecture. It'll make more sense for his explanation as well, that he's struggling to stay awake because he's been having freaky dreams.