|Reviews for Wishing, Waiting, Watching|
| She Who Loves Pineapples II chapter 2 . 8/13/2019
| 0530wolf chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
I will never get used to your writing. You really hit that heart string on what a crush feels like. Though you didn't state any names or any mention of the appearance of the characters. It was kind of hard to get a good image in my mind.
| shadowstrike31415 chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Well written, but there was at least on typo at the beginning.
But is this in high school or college? For the most part, high school crushes last shorter than several years (at least they seem to). Unless you were shooting for the 'true love at first sight" cliché...
I'm not saying that is always the case, but there wasn't enough stuff here to know the characters well enough to predict the type of relationship! Yes I know this is a short story...
Other than that, good job! Keep writing!
| naruxsasumi chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
love the idea, and your writing voice was consistent through out the work. The only place I have problem with is the lack of name for your characters. it makes the readers connect more with your character when they have a name they respond to, it makes them more real. good work though and keep it up.
| damnphool39 chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
It was great! So full of hope! Loved it XD