What is happening in this story?! There's so much going on but I love it. I also love that you made our heroine have regular reactions and actually be afraid. I can't tell you how many times other authors have written their main characters to be fearless and it's annoying and unrealistic. So thank you so much for creating a character I can relate to and not get frustrated with for being an idiot about safety! I'm a little sad this chapter was on the shorter side but it didn't stop me from being riveted.

Great start. Love your descriptions of everything. Really setting the whole tone. Can't wait for the next update

I absolutely love the summary and how you dove right into the action this first chapter. The description of the office seemed a little long and unnecessary to me. It took away from the urgency Sienna was feeling. I always imagine that what's written is what's going on in the main character's thoughts and lengthy details about the surroundings always distract me. Other than that, I'm very excited to see where the story is going to end up.