Reviews for Origin
E.M. Grinstead chapter 55 . 11/13/2017
KEEP IT UP. Please keep this story up, even if it takes forever to update!
E.M. Grinstead chapter 54 . 11/13/2017
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! YOU'RE ALIVE!
Taz176 chapter 55 . 11/12/2017
So I pretty much devoured this story today. I absolutely love it, I'm so hooked. I did not catch the continuity error, I don't know about anyone else haha. Can't wait to read more though!
Everzeno chapter 55 . 11/11/2017
PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! This story is amazing and it has me hooked. I read the whole thing in a day and can't get it out of my head. Your writing is amazing! I hope you decide to keep the story going!
Fish go moo chapter 55 . 11/8/2017
YAAASSS DEATH
Fish go moo chapter 54 . 11/8/2017
YAssss
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 55 . 11/5/2017
holy shit
well that just happened
love the story cant wait for more
Guest chapter 55 . 11/4/2017
Noooooo, we want The Fallen to stay! Please stay!
Guest chapter 55 . 11/4/2017
What the fuck castor
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 54 . 10/29/2017
well that went well
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 53 . 10/27/2017
awesome
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 27 . 10/27/2017
OMG that was amazing
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 25 . 10/27/2017
damn threaten to take away their food and they'll do anything
i love it
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 21 . 10/27/2017
foreshadowing soo bad
NonBinaryAceKitten chapter 16 . 10/27/2017
noo never say that you're just asking for things to get worst
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