Reviews for Origin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() KEEP IT UP. Please keep this story up, even if it takes forever to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! YOU'RE ALIVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I pretty much devoured this story today. I absolutely love it, I'm so hooked. I did not catch the continuity error, I don't know about anyone else haha. Can't wait to read more though! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! This story is amazing and it has me hooked. I read the whole thing in a day and can't get it out of my head. Your writing is amazing! I hope you decide to keep the story going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAAASSS DEATH |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAssss |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit well that just happened love the story cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() Noooooo, we want The Fallen to stay! Please stay! |
![]() ![]() What the fuck castor |
![]() ![]() ![]() well that went well |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn threaten to take away their food and they'll do anything i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() foreshadowing soo bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() noo never say that you're just asking for things to get worst |