I'm loving this story! It's one of the few I've read where I've actually found myself smiling or frowning right along with the characters. They really flow right off the page and are very believable.

I really like how every characters two-dimensional. Pete's a nice guy but can be a bit of a brat at times. Grant's well meaning but struggling to speak up and embrace what he wants out of life, and though Blair's a jerk he has to have some good qualities, considering Grant is willing to stand by him. Plus he and Jet seemed to get along pretty well on the camping trip. It's nice that no one is really painted as the villain here 100%. Since we're reading this from Pete's view some characters are shown in better lights than others, but you've done a great job of giving them all some shades of gray.

I hope your medical issues get better, and take all the time you need to recover. This is a great story and I'll eagerly be following it and any other writings you share on here in the future.

Hear, hear! You owe us nothing. We as readers should be thankful that we get to read your sorry for free. Whenever I read a pushy comment on a story, I can't help but think that the commenter is arrogant and rude. Pay no attention to those jerks!

What's most important is definitely that you get your life back on track, even if you don't go back to updating after. Best of luck to you!

I can't get into it. I know you're trying to show how Peter is struggling with his grief but there's too much repetition (in his inner monolgues). And I guess he's just a character I can't connect with, too cocky with nothing to back it up so far, and too much of a drama queen for me. I know he's a teenager but well... I suppose I shouldn't read stories about teens? I don't know.

oh come on. Summer's over, start writing again, please. Waiting for updates.

I'm glad you didn't abandon the story and I do hope we get more chapters. It's very interesting.

I'm really enjoying the story so far, I love how witty and sassy Pete's character is and I hope that things work out for his and Grant's relationship. I enjoy seeing the progression of Pete's relationship to everyone, especially between him and David. The development of their relationship is realistic to me and it's easy to sympathize with both characters. I can't wait to see more of Pete and Grant's escapades as well as learn more about the reasoning behind his mother's request. The only criticism I have is that the transitioning between different scenes is awkward at some points, I can't tell sometimes where one scene ends and another begins. Other than that the story is really good and I look forward to the next update :)

Enfin, endlich, infine, finally, an update. You do realise how often I was looking into your story for an update. So more, more, more to goooo

Yay! Thank you for updating again! I really like how the story's going so far, especially with Pete and Grant's relationship. Please continue to keep writing!

i followed your story on nifty/gay/college/turn-of-events/ it was on of my favorite stories as you can see it is linked on my profile.

Damn you David! Always interuppting something. I'm seriously dreading the day Pete has to go back to New York. Don't be a stranger update again soon :)

I'm really loving this story! To me it kinda feels like later on either Grant or Pete will betry the other person and screw up their relationship, and then have to fix it. I'm like that Blair doesn't tease Pete as much in the last chapter. I do wonder how he'll react to Grant and Pete's relationship though. Anyway, thank you for writing and I hope you'll update this story soon!

Hej there? anyone? please update soon

Dito to update request from the other reviewer

Update update uodate! I can only wait for so long.