Reviews for Offering
Mrs. Awesomesauceness chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
I appreciate the lady dominance. Super cool.
Ray-Anne chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
The disclaimers are odd.
I assume you do it as a porn tag may look like. I don't thiiink so much is necessary. But given there is definitely not a story as much as there is just a snippet of sex maybe so.

These are good writings (I've read your three so far). Short stories are one of my favorite varieties. These aren't short stories so much as snippets of sex but I would suggest you try your hand at making a story. Sure, keep the sex if you want, but you're clearly talented enough to explore a stronger writing variety.

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