Reviews for West
knockmeoffmyfeet chapter 1 . 7/28/2022
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Ms.K216 chapter 5 . 3/23/2016
Good chapter, it kind of made me think of Jack and Rose from Titanic... which is good because I love them. Anyway, I think it's cute that Alora is learning how to do things with Danial's help. I know I could never handle being on a farm because even the word chore makes me aggravated... Loved the end of this one.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/19/2016
MidnightIris11 chapter 4 . 2/29/2016
Oh Daniel has it bad, and so does she
Ms.K216 chapter 4 . 2/29/2016
The ending though! He's adorkable! I love it! I also loved the description of the room and everything you did there. I think my favorite thing is how Alora calls Dana Mama Adams instead of just Mama... I mean besides it being a cute name I think it's a little soon for Alora to call her just Mama when she legit just now was forced to leave her real mom. I love the story so far! Great chapter!
Shadowkiller176 chapter 3 . 2/27/2016
MidnightIris11 chapter 3 . 2/26/2016
I love this story so much! Can't wait to read more
Ms.K216 chapter 3 . 2/26/2016
Ahhh! I love it! Seriously, I don't know what it is about this story but it makes me smile when I read it. The dialogue is my favorite part I think. I love this so far! Can't wait to see the rest!
MidnightIris11 chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
Love it!
Ms.K216 chapter 2 . 2/21/2016
Smh, I fell asleep in the middle of reading this because I was so tired! I'm glad I woke up early to finish it! I loved this chapter! I really liked the details you put in with Elaina and I'm surprised she didn't blow his cover. I wonder how Alora is going to react to Danial's big reveal. Like will she be angry at him for lying? Is she gonna be happy because she thinks he's cute?! I can't wait to read and find out! I loved this chapter! Can't wait for more of them!
Ms.K216 chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
Ahhhhhhhhh! That was so amazing! It was seriously everything I imagined and more. I'm so glad that you're writing it for me! It's the best birthday present ever! It had perfect everything in it! I love the names, especially Alora's. It sounds like a princess! Also I love the time period accuracy in the dialogue! I loved the descriptions of the dresses. I think the hints of backstory where great too! I loved how you did split POV's. Basically I love everything about the story and thank you so much for writing it for me!