|Reviews for My Religious Journey|
| Rachel Rebecca92 chapter 2 . 5/12/2016
I felt like you tried to cover too much ground all at once. is it possible to cover less ground, and focus on an important moment of your religious journey or at most 2 or 3? but the less the better. I think that you could go in to more depth about your culture, experience, ideas, emotions, ETC... If you did that. Right now it seems like a shopping list of events. Focus on the what happened? How? why? How did this impact/influence me and my culture. Tell us what happened. Don't focus on this happened or covering the entire journey. I think it would be more impactful and effective of a read. It would also serve to be more meaningful and may help others connect better. You could cover the entire thing but It would be a very long paper if you didn't focus in. At the moment, it's rather interesting that it occurred, but not really fully understandable relatable.
| ChiliBean58 chapter 2 . 4/2/2016
:-) this was great
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2016
Awe I like this. I also like the bday story as well. GOD BLESS YOU AMEN