Reviews for Tales From Childhood While Growing Up
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
One of the hardest things we all struggle with is "showing instead of telling the story." There are a few grammatical errors you can probably find with a little editing (ex: smartness isn't a word, etc.)

Aside from the time skips, I can't think of anything else someone would complain about. It's actually a good story in the making.

(I'll be reading more of your content soon, please PM for further assistance if you need it!)
NinjaStoryteller chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Eesh, poor kid, I can empathize. I was a weird kid, teachers hated me, though I'm lucky my parents weren't so strict. Your A/N point is something that more people should take to heart too.